Thursday, October 12, 2006

Train Times

Watching digital train times,
Moments of dotted red.

Flickering change:
How seconds can change everything.

1st:1 minute to Charing Cross.
2nd:3 minutes to Cannon Street.
3rd:7 minutes to Charing Cross.

And flickering red moments of hope.
Flickering dot-moments of take.
Ellipsis until next screen.
A touch-screen.
Flickering red dot dot dot.

I come home a different person.
You may have to change and take,
A replacement bus.

I have been replaced.

3 Comments:

Blogger Russell CJ Duffy said...

blimey. you must be writing on nearly as many blog sites as me.

and this one...

this one has to be the second best team blog there is. (after discharge which is number one of course!)

2:09 PM  
Blogger Inconsequential said...

Gosh, more from Molly...
It's getting hard to stalk you when you spread out so far and wide :)

1:53 AM  
Blogger Molly Bloom said...

CJ - yes...I do like to do lots of writing when I get going. Sometimes I can't stop. Thankyou for your comments.

Inc - stalking? Easy tiger. The further you write, the easier it is to write more.

2:22 AM  

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